Alright, I only got to hear roughly the first minute of your song to start off with (As my internet decided to be iffy on me today), but, from what amount i did hear, it sounded good. The part at 00:15 was a very nice touch in my opinion as it changed up the feel in the beginning to a more active level.
I say you did great for now, good job and continue on with your music.
Thanks! you missed the part were it did become more active just past a minute.
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